My descpiptive essay

So, in english i have to write a essay on something descriptive and i chose Panache , so here it is, its on this picture:

On a good posing surface, sits DevonGlens Panache, a black senior mini rex doe. She has good type, fur, colour and condition. The deep, bold, black colour catched your eye as you look at this rabbit and has no stray white hairs. The dense, velvet like fur is soft not only to the touch, but your eyes as well. When you run your hands through the fur it jumps back into position. She is posed proper and perfect, showing off her short coby mid-section and her hight that is just right. She has amazing width that is balanced and proportioned to the hight and depth. She is exceptionally full and smooth. You can run your hands over her and not catch a thing. She is as round as a boulder rolling down a gigantic hill. Her ears are a good length , not to long, and not to short. They have good substance and are well furred. Bold bum and bone is what she has. Her bone is thick and powerful and she has a nice butt that is very full. Overall, DevonGlens Panache is a good example of the breed.